Talk:Tutorial

|| Please revise this page.

|| The only section jumps between 2nd and 3rd person, and contains insufficient explanation. Keep text neutral, in 3rd person, and consistent.

|| If J.A.N.E. is named J.A.N.E., then don't refer to them as Jane.

|| Link the Horizon Transit Hub at the first mention of a transithub, fix the section header (again, objective speech; try something like Sequence? (what it's called internally iirc) idk, just not "What happens in the tutorial"). Time also jumps from present to past tense in your text too often.

|| Pirates, Core Systems, Horizon's End, and Ships should be linked (large ship-like structure can be swapped for large Starship), and the Tutorial really isn't a special place. At first mention of a page's title (Ex. Shuttle, it should be bolded.) || 4/11/26 Bronze (Talk | Contribs)